Notes from Audience about our piece in the current state:
Strengths:
- Good inter-cutting between scenes
- Dynamic camera movement
- Good contrast in sound between house and party scenes
- Looks very cinematic
- Colour grading (this was the raw footage)
- Good range of shots
Improvements:
- Get some more diegetic sounds, make them more prevalent
- Put the titles in the house scenes, on the still shots.
A major thing that we got from this screening was how effective the sound and visuals were with the hammer hit towards the end. This caused the students to react in the visceral way that we intended, and so that told us that it was very effective.
Points to take from this feedback: Our plan was to keep the titles exclusively on the party scenes, to fit the rhythm and to not distract from the intensity of the fight in the house. We now plan to move onto getting the sound mix finalised.
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